Now serious comments: I don’t like the bird’s view effect in panel 2, the tiles on the floor confuses the eye and the people look like little dots. How about a perspective picture from a tilted angle, the view as it would seem from a corner? That way you could show the whole room without resorting to a simplified top view – I know I’m being critical ;-)
Yeah, I can see that. Your idea would work a lot better. I just wanted to give an overview without killing myself, but I guess I shouldn’t have become a comic artist then! ;)
“Fine” – That bad? Poor P must be stressed to the max.
Also, hot girl-on-gril action – Yay!
Now serious comments: I don’t like the bird’s view effect in panel 2, the tiles on the floor confuses the eye and the people look like little dots. How about a perspective picture from a tilted angle, the view as it would seem from a corner? That way you could show the whole room without resorting to a simplified top view – I know I’m being critical ;-)
Yeah, I can see that. Your idea would work a lot better. I just wanted to give an overview without killing myself, but I guess I shouldn’t have become a comic artist then! ;)